I’ve dreamed about writing this blog post for years. Literally. And now that the moment is here, I’m not sure where to start or what to include.
So let’s get the important stuff out of the way first…
I sold my manuscript, TELL ME SOMETHING GOOD, to the Entangled Publishing Indulgence line!!
As you can see, I am beyond thrilled. I love this manuscript (almost as much as I love Reese’s peanut butter cups) and as someone who has “stalked” Entangled for awhile and knows what they have accomplished, I’m happy to put it in their capable hands.
*needle scratching on the record* or *tape rewinding in the VCR* (Take your pick, although I fear both references date me).
Anywho…REWIND! Back to the beginning…
I decided to get serious about writing romance in the summer of 2009. I was unemployed and knew this was the time if I was ever going to do it. I’d actually started my first manuscript in 2002 after I graduated from college when I *sigh* found myself unemployed. But I didn’t know what I was doing and I got halfway through the manuscript and realized I had no idea what happened next. I found a job and put it aside.
But I never forgot about it and whenever I got a new computer, I made sure I transferred the file.
In 2009, I figured out how to end the book. And I was off. I read blogs on writing, posts on message boards, and attended RWA meetings and conferences. And I wrote with the goal of becoming a better writer every day.
To make this long story a little shorter, let’s skip ahead, shall we?
In March 2012, I received the completely unexpected honor of being named a RWA Golden Heart® finalist. My first thought was, “Oh, my God. I don’t suck!”
I started querying agents because I was having trouble getting a response from a publisher I’d submitted to and I thought having an agent on my side would help. A solid plan, but one that didn’t work because the agents, one by one, rejected Tell Me.
They were nice about it, saying complimentary things about my writing and often offering feedback, but a rejection is a rejection is a rejection.
Anyway, even without an agent, I eventually heard back from said publisher and it was a “no.” I was disappointed, of course, but I knew it wasn’t the end of the world.
I submitted the MS to another publisher because they offered a quick turnaround with guaranteed feedback. They were true to their word. Again, it was a “no.” This rejection, however, sent me into a bit of a tailspin because of the editor’s promised feedback. She said I did something in the story that I would never intentionally do in a million years. I was appalled/embarrassed and immediately thought of what I needed to do to rip my book apart and start over.
Then I calmed down. I thought back to the feedback I’d received from agents, critique partners, and the other editor. No one had ever menioned this, and I realized that editor just didn’t “get” my book (which is fine, BTW. Not everyone will and I’m okay with that. This really is a subjective business). It didn’t make sense to make wholesale changes for someone who’d already rejected the manuscript. (And no, I don’t want to be more specific about the feedback because I didn’t change my MS based on what she said and I don’t want to unduly influence anyone who might read the book in question in the future. And no, the feedback wasn’t mean. It just happened to hit a nerve).
Okay, so I wasn’t going to change my MS based on this editor’s opinion. But I needed to do something. There was something holding agents and editors back from agreeing to represent/buy it. I set Tell Me aside and worked on other manuscripts while I let possible changes percolate in the back of my mind.
At the start of this year, I decided this was going to be my year. I was tired of writing and not being published. I was going to do everything in my power to make my dream come to reality. But you can’t get published (with a publishing house anyway) unless you submit, and I wasn’t out on submission anywhere.
So I needed to get cracking.
Although I’d been working on other manuscripts, I always intended to return to Tell Me because I adored the story and the characters and I had the confidence Golden Heart final had given me to fall back on (there’s no way I would have finaled in the contest if it truly sucked). Also, don’t tell anyone, but I’m kind of stubborn.
I went back to the first editor’s feedback. She mentioned a lack of character development. I didn’t agree with that assessment because I knew exactly how the characters changed and grew throughout the book, but I also knew there was a distinct possibility that what I knew happened might not have made it on to the page. Maybe I was being too subtle.
Game plan time!
I knew that some writers swear by story fixer Michael Hauge. I went Internet searching and found this blog post describing Hauge’s method of creating inner conflict in characters. I applied his methods to my hero and heroine, Tate and Noelle. Seeing their histories/fears/desires on paper really crystallized who they were as people to me, and I went back into the manuscript and added all this stuff where I saw fit. At times, I felt like like I was being too heavy handed. But no one who’s read it since I made the changes has commented on it.
Lesson learned: Screw subtlety. Also, my additions probably aren’t that heavy handed, but I was being too subtle.
The other area that needed improving based on agent feedback: Pacing. I could work with this, so I moved some things around and deleted some others to speed up the action.
When I thought the manuscript was worthy of being seen by outside eyes, I sent it to my friend and fellow writer, Dawn Alexander, who’d generously offered to critique it for me. She did an amazing job, pointing out my weak spots. I made (most of) her changes. Then I read it a million times because I am a perfectionist and I really, really wanted this to be my year.
When I was so sick of Noelle and Tate (though I love them dearly) that I couldn’t bear reading about them any more, I submitted the manuscript to Entangled Publishing on June 17. On June 22, I received an email from editor Gwen Hayes saying she was interested in publishing Tell Me.
But the book still had to go to acquisitions, so there was a chance that it could still be rejected. I was hoping to get everything wrapped up by RWA Nationals, so I could shout out it from the rooftops, but that didn’t happen. I talked to Entangled authors, Nicole Helm and Jackie Ashenden, who talked me down from the ledge and told me acquisitions wasn’t a scary place to be.
Still! I was so freaking close to that Reese’s peanut butter cup I could almost taste that perfect mixture of chocolate and peanut butter, but it was just out of my reach.
Finally, late last week, I saw this Gwen Hayes tweet.
I raced to my email and there was the golden ticket email. The acquisitions board said YES!
*press play for Cece Peniston’s Finally* (Yes, I’m aging myself again, but I don’t care!)
Lessons learned
1. Dream.
2. Do the work to make the dream come true.
3. Strive to be better every day.
4. Trust yourself. Consider ALL the feedback you receive, incorporate the parts that resonate, and discard the rest. YOU know your story best, but others can see things that you are blind to.
By the way, the story really hasn’t changed much. I tweaked and improved some things, but the story is the same story I came up with way back when.
Oh, the story, you say. What’s it about? It’s funny and sexy and sweet and modern. IMHO. And totally me. Here’s the (unofficial) blurb for TELL ME SOMETHING GOOD (to be published in 2014).
Tate
Dr. Noelle Butler, the host of the radio show Noelle Knows, is an uptight psychologist who needs to chill out. She knows nothing about sports, but she’s talking about them anyway. So what if I called in to her show to set her straight?
Noelle
Sports radio talk show host Tate Grayson is a playboy trust fund baby who wouldn’t know hard work if it bit him in the butt. So what if I phoned in and told him to stick to sports and to leave the relationship advice to me?
Here’s what. The station’s listeners loved our “discussions” and now we’ve been tasked to do a show together. Unbelievable.
But, hey, it’s only for a few weeks. What’s the worst that could happen? Besides killing each other? How about falling for each other?
The end. Almost. There are A LOT of people I need to thank, but this post is already obnoxiously long, so I’ll save that for another post. Probably tomorrow.
Right now, I’m off to celebrate!
P.S. How many pop culture references can you spot in this post?
Heather Ashby said:
SUPER CONGRATULATIONS, Jamie!!! I’m so excited for you (and love the photo of you jumping in the air in black and purple! And Travolta too) I absolutely LOVED you receiving the Golden Heart nod and thinking, “Oh, my God. I don’t suck!!!!” As to the needle on the record, NO WAY are you old enough to remember that. Anyway, congratulations and I wish you all the best in your new home at Entangled!
P.S. If you thought you were sick of Noelle and Tate before, you better get to know them all over again, cuz you’re gonna be spending a lotta time with them once edits start 🙂
Heather Ashby said:
OOPs. forgot something: DAMN THE TORPEDOES! FULL SPEED AHEAD 🙂 Heather
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Heather! FULL SPEED AHEAD!
rwrnet said:
THAT’S AWESOME!!! CONGRATULATIONS, JAMIE! I know this is something you’ve worked hard toward and it’s inspiring to read about you accomplishing your goal!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks!
Kay Hudson said:
Wonderful news, Jamie! Huge congratulations!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Kay!
tamrabaumann said:
Jamie I am SOOO Happy for you! I’ve had my fingers crossed since Atlanta! Can’t wait to own my own copy!!!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Tammy! I can’t wait to hear your sale story. It’s coming!
Terri Osburn said:
Whootiee-Whoot-Toot-Toot!!! I am so excited for you!! I love the sound of this story when we all finaled last year and bow to you for selling it yourself. WTG, Jamie!!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thank you, Terri! I loved writing it, and I hope others enjoy it, too.
Dawn Alexander said:
I am so excited for you! *throws confetti and snoopy dances around the living room*
J. Kathleen Cheney said:
Big Congrats!!!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thank you!
mizwrite said:
Go, Jamie!!! The romance world definitely needs more sports heroes, and I’m so glad to see you giving them to us! CONGRATS!
Jamie Wesley said:
LOL. Thank you! I always think of you when I write my sports heroes. I hope you come to San Antonio next year.
Meg Kassel said:
Wow,congrats, Jamie! So excited for your news! Can’t wait to read Tell Me Something Good.
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Meg! The thought of other people reading my stuff makes me excited and really, really nervous.
kristenethridge said:
Yay!!! Congratulations!!! I love the story of persistence you paint here–a must-have for any author.
And I love the pop culture references. All of them.
Oh and you definitely don’t suck.
Yay!!!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, my fellow Dallas girl!
Sharon Wray said:
Congratulations, Jamie! I am so very happy for my Golden Heart sister!!!!
I hope this feeling never goes away for you. 🙂
Jamie Wesley said:
Thank you, Sharon! GH forever!
Roni Loren said:
No one deserves this news more than you. Love the pic. Big hugs and congrats!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thank you, Roni, for always being there for me. I was looking for some appropriate clip art and I couldn’t find anything I like. Then I was like, Hey! I have a pic of ME jumping in excitement. Voila!
marybethlee said:
Congratulations!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thank you!
kimberlyquintonauthor said:
Yay Jamie!! Congratulation! I can’t wait to read Tell Me Something Good- I love the blurb!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Kim! I hope to see you at the next NT meeting.
Sidney said:
Yay! Congrats!!!!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Sidney! I keep yaying in my head.
Vicky Green said:
Great and inspiring post, Jamie. Congratulations to you!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Vicky. Sometimes, it was frustrating, but like I said, I can be stubborn. 🙂
Nancy C said:
The story sounds wonderful! Congratulations … wishing you much success.
Nancy C
Jamie Wesley said:
Thank you!
QuilterPhyl said:
Congratulations, Jamie! I am looking forward to reading this; your book sounds very fun.
Jamie Wesley said:
Thank you! Fun was definitely the tone I was going for.
Sally Kilpatrick said:
Congratulations! A well deserved sale, and I can’t wait to read it!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thank you, Sally!
Chrissy S said:
Yay!!! Congrats! So excited for u!!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Chrissy!
April B said:
Congrats to you! Those Lessons Learned are awesome, and I will take them to heart as I finally go back on submission sometime this decade. And that blurb is awesome – I can’t wait to read it!
jackieashenden said:
Congrats, Jamie!! What did I tell you? Hehe. I love being right. 🙂 So glad you’re part of the Entangled family. Oh and btw, your story sounds AWESOME!!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Jackie! And you were SO right! 🙂
romilybernard said:
Congratulations!!!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Romily!
carolynrae1 said:
Jamie,
Enjoy your excitement. You have earned it. If you think it took a long time, mine was much longer, but you have made it. congratulations. Carolyn Rae Author – facebook, Romancing the Gold, coming soon from Noble Romance.
Jamie Wesley said:
Hi Carolyn,
Thank you for stopping by and I’m so happy for you!!
Lexi Greene said:
Jamie, your news is so exciting and awesome and amazing. Lovely to read your post. Enjoy every wonderful, surreal moment. You’re a published writer!!!!! With Entangled, which is a great achievement!! Cyber cheers, Lexi x
Jamie Wesley said:
You’re a published writer!!!!!
Such an awesome comment. I love it!
Jennifer Hayward said:
Jamie I am so so happy for you!! Congratulations. I hope you soak up every last wonderful minute of it!
Jamie Wesley said:
Thanks, Jennifer! I’m going to do my best.
donnaalward said:
DUUUUUUDE! How did I miss this? I got back from Nationals and buried myself in my deadline book and just kind of skimmed social media…but this is HUUUUGE! So happy for you!
There’s something to be said for that positive “this is my year” attitude. So proud of you and know there are some wonderful things to come!
Vivi Andrews said:
Jamie, I am over the moon for you and I cannot WAIT to read Tate and Noelle’s story. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Looking forward to getting that baby on my ereader!